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Please RedLine or Critiqueby ~KitKatQT

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_{i drew the side of a face and i want help on my human anatomy so please help ;u;}

Critique by ~Thunder-Neko Dec 10, 2012, 1:31:30 PM

_{Hello Kitkat. Aha I'm kinda a harsh critique so.. Anyways, here is what I think:

Cons:

The nose is unusually large and a bit far up on the face. The ears are also a bit high up on the head. And the mouth on the face would not be all the way on the right side of her face if she were looking sideways. Only half of her mouth would be shown.

Pros:

The detail on the neck is good, and the hair is nicely drawn. Her arms aren't too big or too skinny.

Vision: 4 1/2 stars
Originality: 2 1/2 since a lot of people draw homestuck characters.
Technique: 4 stars
Impact: 4 stars}

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=MaiestasLeviathan Dec 10, 2012 Student General Artist

Heyy if its anatomy that's your problem i always find starting with whatever body part your more comfortable drawing is easiest. You start with, for example, the torso and then draw whatever is easiest and continue from that focal point. Try thinking about your own body and put yourself in that kind of pose. If you can't do it chances are its not anatomically correct. Faces and hands are what people find the most difficult but there is no algorithm for art just practice and youll get better, also observe people a lot.

!bambous Dec 10, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

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~KitKatQT Dec 10, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

_{thank you ;u;}

!bambous Dec 10, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

You're welcome vuv

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